Baato Hi Baato Me (3)
Love is a temporary madness. It erupts like an earthquake and then subsides. And when it subsides you have to make a decision. You have to work out whether your roots have become so entwined together that it is inconceivable that you should ever part. Because this is what love is. Love is not breathlessness, it is not excitement, it is not the promulgation of promises of eternal passion. That is just being “in love” which any of us can convince ourselves we are.
Love itself is what is left over when being in love has burned away, and this is both an art and a fortunate accident. (These are lines from some movie whose name I forgot!)
Mr. Nonsense
It’s love that adds life to life
Without love, life’s a whore
What is it that the whore wants?
Just the touch of love and more!
(Period)
Feel my love, baby
Shed all fear
Love doesn’t hurt, baby
There’s no tear
You’re the one baby
You’re the one I love
You’re the one my heart pines for
You’re the one that brings me hope
I wish to hold your hands in mine
Fill the space between your fingers
Fill your heart with my love
Erase every trace of fear that still lingers
Hold your face so soft and delicate
Trace my way through the tresses
Touch the tender lips and watch them curve
And wipe away your tear with a gentle caress
You’re the one who gives me butterflies
When I hear just your name
You’re the one without whom
Life to me is an unfair game
This heart’s yours baby
The embrace’s for you to fill in
This door’s been waiting for you
Shed all your fears and just walk in
Let me hold you close, baby
Let me feel ur breathe on my skin
Let me touch ur lips with mine, oh dear
Let me feel the simmering heat within
I just want to be yours baby
I just want you to be mine…
(Period)
Ms. Logical
You sound too krazy to be true
But your words give a new hope
I feel a new sense of numbness
As I watch my fears elope
Take me in your arms dear
Let the bodies twine
You profess your love in a way so sweet
Can the girl in me ever decline?
Devilinside said,
March 5, 2009 at 22:03
“This heart’s yours baby
The embrace’s for you to fill in
This door’s been waiting for you
Shed all your fears and just walk in”
baaton hi baaton mein can go on and on and on …and one will never feel bored…
Ms. Logically Illogical said,
March 6, 2009 at 04:34
Simply superb! I love those expressions, each one of them.
I also like the way you handle the smooth flow of thoughts.
“You profess your love in a way so sweet
Can the girl in me ever decline?”
That simply spoke my mind out. That’s almost the exact thing that I had in my mind while I was going through the post. You seem to grasp the reader’s mind as well while penning down those lines. Simply superb!
Where from do you get such pictures that blend so well with the mood of the posts?
Saswat said,
March 6, 2009 at 09:04
This time, I think Ms Logical hears more logical & relevent lines from Mr Nonsense than the previous occasion.I hope this will help Ms Logical get over her mysterious fear.
Otherwise,”baaton hi baaton mein ” ye silsila yun hi chalta rahega.:)
indu said,
March 6, 2009 at 09:22
“If you profess your love so sweetly
can the girl in me ever decline”
familiar lines..
but wat the heck..most awesome.You excel at poetry.
“Love itself is what is left over when being in love has burned away, and this is both an art and a fortunate accident.”
I kept coming back to this line..stirred something in me.
indu said,
March 6, 2009 at 09:23
n i tried changing the timings…somehow i dont get the right one..i opted for kol timings..bloger has this problem i guess..or i dont know my way around still
Nivedita said,
March 6, 2009 at 13:21
I agree with you a 100%. This is exactly what love is- whatever remains after the settling of dust on the novelty of new( now old) love.
krazywordsmith said,
March 6, 2009 at 18:23
@devilinside
thanx
now that u’ve alrdy mentioned the word, that gives me the feeling u did get bored a bit…isn’t it
well, this is the last in the series…probably
@Ms. Logically Illogical
(like u pointed out in a previous comment)
Thanx again…so u continue to stay anonymous! never mind…thanx neways
abt reading the reader’s mind…i guess that’s a gift
…those pictures…well, can’t talk on this topic on such an open platform…let’s meet…we can discuss on that and most preferably a few other things as well…in details, of course…
@Saswat
Ya…but to xpect Ms. Logical to get rid of her fear and embrance Mr. Nonsense’s love…that’s a hope against hope, i guess… hehe
(I still don’t understand why u found the last one illogical)
“silsila ye mohabbat ka yuhin chalti rahe
chingari jo sulag rahi hai is dil me yuhin jalti rahe”
yuck! that was a pretty lame attempt…won’t try that again
@indu
…lines which I cudnt resist putting down in that last stanza…that’s the best way I could have ended the conversation..the duel was draining a lot out of me.( to come back and start all over again from where I left…it was indeed a bit tough)
oye, the lines are not just familiar, they are urs babe
kichi copyright wagera lafda nahi ta??
@Nivedita
Thanx for dropping by and for those words
Love is indeed a sweet thing…the freshness and the fragrance lingers forever
Btw, I’m putting u on blogroll…