Baato Hi Baato Me (1)
Characters:
Mr. Nonsense: A krazy fellow who has absolutely no idea what he’s saying or doing. He spends most of the time whining about everything impossible. He’s weird and pathetic, to be precise.
Ms. Logical: A young lovely damsel who believes everything that happens is best described rather logically. Anything, that defies logic, simply can’t exist.
Mr. Nonsense:
Oh my lovely lady, thy smile has touched my heart
A heart that was proud to be virgin, now it’s falling apart
Ms. Logical:
Ah my crazy friend u seems so pathetic
A smile can’t touch and a heart can’t be proud
How can I believe u dear friend
When u defy my darling logic
Mr. Nonsense:
Oh my innocent love, love knows no logic
To feel the warmth of love
To fathom its wondrous deeds
U have to believe in magic
Ms. Logical:
Ur condition seems so tragic
Cos there’s nothing called magic
It’s just a fool’s word to describe things
That he fails to describe in logic
Mr. Nonsense:
Human brain shall always fail
To trace life’s capricious trail
Deeds of Nature like life and death
Your logic can never describe
You don’t have to be a fool
To believe in the magic of life
A teaspoonful of love
And a drop of romance
For you my love, I prescribe
(Period)
Ms. Logical:
You’re so dumb & krazy
But you sound so very true
I confess my ignorance
About the magic called life
Yeah, indeed I have no clue
My obsession for logic
Is a pretext to hide my fear
It’s love’s treacherous ways
That I always get to hear
I’m just not ready to embrace love
Cos I hate to shed a tear
(Period)
debashree said,
February 20, 2009 at 18:40
nice one….smooth flow of words!!!!!
Saswat said,
February 20, 2009 at 20:22
simply….Wonderful
wildflower said,
February 20, 2009 at 20:49
cool…very cool!
krazywordsmith said,
February 21, 2009 at 02:12
@all
thanx
@debashree
finally tote time miligala comments lekhibaku…idiot!
@saswat
arey i know it’s wonderful…aftrall I hav written it…say sthng i dont know
@wildflower
how cool?? temperature…??
vikuset said,
February 21, 2009 at 12:49
bobal……rola heichhi be…….
mote tu tike english tution kareibu ki?
Devilinside said,
February 21, 2009 at 18:40
comments lekhiba tike deri heigala…but as usual classic poetry thru words that describe emotions between 2 persons in love and having a talk…kaash samaste MR NONSENSE bhalia thante
mou said,
February 21, 2009 at 20:56
very creative…with a hint of satire…
krazywordsmith said,
February 21, 2009 at 23:27
@viku
fees kete?? thanx, btw
@devilinside
kaash… but some people are better the way they are… gives me topic to write about and of course fall in luv over n over again
@mou
thanx re…
btw, u r the only one who noted the satire thing(or maybe the only1 to write abt it actually)…. i’m mighty impressed
btw, i’d been waiting for ur post for quite some time…finally it’s there now…nice collection of favs!
Ms. Logically Illogical said,
February 22, 2009 at 05:17
Simply awesome! (Your fan-list gets longer today; I’m the latest to be added
)
The immaculate flow of words and the emotions in the conversation gives me the feeling there IS some hidden reality in this one.
Care to shed some light?
Keep posting.
“Krazywordsmith” – Interesting pseudonym!
krazywordsmith said,
February 22, 2009 at 17:35
“My Fan-list!?…lol…thanx anyways… m honoured
Oops..I forgot my torch somewhere…arrggghhhh! I’ve been forgetting things pretty regularly now.
Ms.Logically Illogical…ahem!…interesting one too…
well, i cooked up mine…krazywordsmith I am
mou said,
February 23, 2009 at 13:31
@ krazywordsmith:
am searching for a smiley with the smug look on my face right now
on a serious note, the ‘satire thing’ is actually present in most of your posts i went through…am guessing that it comes naturally to you…i wish i could write like that…
P.S. waiting for your song list
krazywordsmith said,
February 24, 2009 at 00:46
‘..i wish i could write like that…” :O Pagla gayi ho kya?? You writ so well, y wud u wish to write some crap like me??
abt the satire thing, many hav pointed that out in real life… now tht u hav said it too…I guess that’s ME… satire n sarcasm…these r like turn-ons for me
Song list’s ready ma’am…ab thoda padh leta hun…kal se mids shuru ho rahe hain n I’m busy ranting… fir milenge…xams k baad