It didn’t hurt a bit…
Red on my robe
Red on my fingers
Red on my body
Red that still lingers
Blood was the reason
I thought it was just a stain
You slit my throat; it felt so right
And I could hardly feel the pain
It feels so right
To be ripped apart
By the one you love so much
From whom you can’t, otherwise, part
My life was leaving me
And so were you in a way
My love had stabbed me
Yet it all seemed so okay
I stretched my hands to reach you
You just didn’t bother to care
You just kept looking on till I die
And my blood spread everywhere
You were there till my eyes closed
You were there till my last breath
I lay there like the lifeless log
Yet, I was ‘celebrating’ my death
Yes, I was ‘celebrating’ my death
The kind only love could cause
Love that turns your life into a symphony
And ends it with an immortal pause
It’s just this pause that sometimes hurts
Cos it means I have to stop trying
It wasn’t a first; you’ve stabbed me before
And the pain seemed so familiar when I was dying
You’d stabbed me with your words and deeds
When I kept on trying
You made me feel the pain everyday
No wonder, it didn’t hurt when I was dying
mou said,
February 8, 2009 at 20:15
nice blog…and very powerful expressions in this poem…it’s simply too good.
and thanks for the comments
. had gone only for a day…came back to raipur today morning…
indu said,
February 9, 2009 at 01:28
Its the same pain in here which i need to drain,and for a moment i think wats the point even if i drain there’s notin much to gain… and yet again its just a pain…..
The above ur some lines taken from a friend’s blog..but it makes full sense..
Love and hate is one and all..
good work!
indu said,
February 9, 2009 at 01:30
above are*
and i forgot to thank you for the blog roll
krazywordsmith said,
February 9, 2009 at 13:06
@mou
just for a day…k
n thanx for dropping by
@indu
thanx for dropping by
interesting line…
blogroll k liye just thanx?? put mine on urs idiot
jignyanshu said,
February 9, 2009 at 21:13
Kana kire ete bhala kana lekhuchu???
Kana kaha pai ete hurt hauchu???
mate doubt laguchi..!!!
krazywordsmith said,
February 10, 2009 at 00:48
@jignyanshu
to baliya serious topic ta lekhiparibini ta emti alia topic upare ketebele kemti lekhipakauchi
arey kehi kichi hurt karinahanti re… just emti mood hela emti kichi lekhibaku ta lekhideli…dont draw conclusions
Ms. Logically Illogical said,
February 22, 2009 at 05:25
Wow! Very Powerful Expressions. The perfect words to paint the picture that you have in mind. Great One!
krazywordsmith said,
February 22, 2009 at 17:43
love and pain….one of the most common themes of most writings…i guess i derived those expressions frm the ones i hav read somewhere or the other